Here I am
Another day
Another night
Another minute
Another second
What does it matter
You are not here with me
I put all my love
In a box
You lost the key
In a letter
You never read it
In a song
You didn’t like the tune
What does it matter now
You will never be here with me
Prompt from The Light and Shade Challenge
Picture by saavem on rgbstock.com
Sad poem! 😦
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Just following the prompt 🙂
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Hey just a thought, wouldn’t it sound different with these lines:
In a box you never opened,
In a letter you never read,
In a song you never heard..
try putting the front and back parts of the poem and might be something worth reading.
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Yeah, it sounds different. But I like it better the other way 🙂 Thanks for your comment 🙂
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So sad! Thank you for sharing this. Lyssa M x
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I never realised it would end up sounding this sad 😦 Thanks Lyssa 🙂
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Sad and beautiful.
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Thanks Martha 🙂
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I felt the heart break! This is poignant and awesome. So much emotion in so few words! ♥
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Thanks Kathy 🙂 Glad I was able to convey the emotions well.
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So sad
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Thanks for you comment Sue 🙂
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Yeah quite emotional, but why the sad poem?
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Those were the first thoughts that came to me as soon as I saw the image 🙂 Thanks for the comment 🙂
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loved it! intense and sad, though.
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Thanks Uma 🙂
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